Sunday, July 19, 2015

Out-of-Class #2: A Fatal Example


July 16, 2015
Golf Course Flooding

The road to recovery for Dallas-Forth Worth *** FATAL FACT ERROR: DALLAS-FORT WORTH, STED DALLAS-FORTH WORTH. SPELL CHECK WILL NOT CATCH A SPELLING ERROR THAT CREATES A CORRECTLY-SPELLED AND UNINTENDED WORD, SO WE NEED TO RUN SPELL CHECK AND EYEBALL EACH NOUN *** golf courses is still in effect ONGOING, STED IN EFFECT for those devastated by the record rainfall experienced in May.

DFW golf was severely impacted by the heavy rains with some courses still indefinitely closed, while other courses have faced an easier recovery process from the flooding that shut them down.

Two courses that sit on different sides of Lake Lewisville remained closed, HOW DO WE KNOW THIS? ATTRIBUTE but the immediate future of Lake Park Golf Club looks brighter than that of Old American Golf Club currently.

Lake Park General Manger Garrett Peek said he expects nine holes to reopen as soon as Monday, July 20, with all 18 expected to be in action in about two weeks time. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF Peek said, “We had no damages here, so once the water receded we were able to start cleaning up and mowing to get the course ready again.”

Old American Golf Club General Manager Mike McCabe was not as optimistic saying that he has no estimated time of reopening at the moment. With Lake Lewisville *** INCORRECT NAME: IT’S LEWISVILLE LAKE, NOT LAKE LEWISVILLE http://www.swf-wc.usace.army.mil/lewisville/ *** reaching the highest point in its history at 537 feet, Old American has a waiting process ahead. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF “Lake Lewisville is currently sitting at about 530.95 feet and it needs to be below 526 to be completely off the golf course,” McCabe said.

According to AvidGolfer magazine, DFW set a 115-year record in May with 16.96 inches of rain falling following an already above average amount of rainfall in April. THIS IS WEAK SOURCING; INSTEAD OF USING OTHER MEDIA, JUST CALL A WEATHER FORECASTER AT THE NATIONAL WEATHER SERVICE, OR EVEN AT ONE OF THE AREA TV STATIONS. PLUS, THAT SOURCE WOULD BE A GREAT NEUTRAL EXPERT ON THE SUBJECT

This is the complete opposite end of the spectrum from North Texas precipitation in 2014, which received only 21.32 inches of precipitation, the second lowest amount since 1963, according to AvidGolfer magazine. THIS IS WEAK SOURCING; INSTEAD OF USING OTHER MEDIA, JUST CALL A WEATHER FORECASTER AT THE NATIONAL WEATHER SERVICE, OR EVEN AT ONE OF THE AREA TV STATIONS


Courses that sat on bodies of water were not the only ones suffering from the downpours. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF “We had rain 23 of 31 days in May,” said Bridlewood Golf Club General Manger *** FATAL FACT ERROR: MANAGER, STED MANGER. SPELL CHECK WILL NOT CATCH A SPELLING ERROR THAT CREATES A CORRECTLY-SPELLED AND UNINTENDED WORD, SO WE NEED TO RUN SPELL CHECK AND EYEBALL EACH NOUN ***  Jerry Graham. “We had limited customers on many of those days, because not very many golfers want to play in those elements.”

Bridlewood was not unable to escape the flooding completely. Bridlewood Superintendent Jay Tinsley said the entire green on hole nine was under water. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF To clean up trash and debris as well as clear off the water, Tinsley said, “We had to exhaust all eight of us on staff for the entire day to get that green cleaned up. We had to rake and blow silt away and even pressure wash the green.”

Tinsley said that on most days following the rain they were able to get the course operational again, in terms of the front nine open, within four or five hours each day.

“The struggle we faced was water blocking the tunnels to get to hole 11 and that made it difficult to get the whole course going,” Tinsley said.

At Old American, the scale of flooding was substantially larger with 12 greens completely submerged by water and 16 holes being affected in some way, according to McCabe. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF “The greens here were completely submerged for 47 days, and the fairways and tee boxes here are still submerged currently on day 65 (July 15),” McCabe said.

The road to recovery was a similar waiting process at both Lake Park and Old American, with little to do otherwise. Because it was not rushing water, the damages were non-existent for the most part; rather it was a clean up effort once the water receded. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF “It is like a bath tub you just have to wait for the water to drain before you can do much of anything,” McCabe said.

McCabe said the recovery process, following the water receding, has included taking soil samples to send to labs. This was to determine if there would be any long lasting effects of the flooding and what cultivation practices to take to help the golf course.

Right now the prominent issue Old American is facing is algae in the fairways as the water recedes back. If not cleared right away it will suffocate the grass. With the bermuda grass Old American uses, they have a small window of opportunity for it to grow, said McCabe. START NEW PARAGRAPH HERE; ONLY ONE MAIN POINT OR ONE SUPPORTING POINT OR ONE QUOTE PER GRAF “Once it hits September and October there is not a chance it can grow through the winter and we may have to try again next year,” said McCabe.

Tinsley said, “The best thing to do at any course is to salvage what you can, access the situation, and figure out lake levels.” For most places, it really messed up schedules and the daily maintenance routines, and that was one of the most difficult parts, Tinsley said.

The recent weather has improved the situation for almost every course. With May and June being the biggest budgeted months for most courses in North Texas, the financial recovery process will continue to be difficult around DFW.












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Mike McCabe
Old American Golf Club General Manger
972-998-3035

Jerry Graham
Bridlewood Golf Club General Manager

Jay Tinsley
Superintendent Bridlewood Golf Club

Garrett Peek
Lake Park Golf Course General Manager
972-219-4661

AvidGolfer Magazine, July 2015 issue


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INSTRUCTOR COMMENTS: THE BIGGEST PROBLEM HERE IS FATALS. WE NEED TO NOT SIMPLY RELY ON SPELL CHECK AND MAKE SURE THAT WE DOUBLE-CHECK WITH OUR OWN EYES EVERY NOUN (PERSON, PLACE OR THING), EVERY TITLE, EVERY STATISTICAL UNIT, AND THE ENTIRETY OF EVERY QUOTE TO MAKE SURE WHAT WE WROTE WAS CORRECT AND WHAT WE INTENDED TO WRITE. BEYOND THAT, WE NEEDED SOME NEUTRAL EXPERTS, LIKE A WEATHER FORECASTER WHO COULD OCMMENT ON THE CLIMATOLOGY AND A TURF SPECIALIST WHO COULD COMMENT ON THE DIFFICULTIES BEING FACED BY GOLF EXPERTS THERE, IRONICALLY, MSU HAS MANY SUCH EXPERTS AS THE SCHOOL IS THE WORLD’S LEADER FOR TURF RESEARCH, SO ONE COULD HAVE BEEN EASILY FOUND. PLUS, OUR GRAFS ARE TOO BIG; WE NEED TO MAKE SURE WE SEPARATE PARAPHRASES FROM QUOTES AND PUT EACH IN ITS OWN GRAF TO LET OUR  MAIN POINTS AND SUPPORTING QUOTES STAND OUT FROM EACH OTHER. AND WE SHOULD NOT BE CITING OTHER MEDIA; IF THEY COULD GET THE INFO FROM SOMEWHERE, THEN WE NEED TO GET THE INFO FROM WHEREVER THEY GOT THE INFO. MEDIA CANNOT JUST CITE OTHER MEDIA; AT SOME POINT, SOMEONE IS GOING TO HAVE TO GET THEIR OWN INFO DIRECTLY.

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