Everyone did at least fine on this assignment, some by sticking to basic ledes, and others by trying alternative ledes.
Since you seem to have the former down pat, we'll look at the latter. Off we go:
Arrested? Prepare for a mug shot, fingerprints, and a $25 service charge.
It's
basic and to-the-point, yet still a bit creative in terms of the
question lede. It makes it sound a bit more conversational. So did this
one:
In an attempt to cure East Lansing's financial
troubles, committing a crime now costs offenders more than the
humiliation of an arrest.
These next two one looked at the topic from a similarly-practical angle; what you may see as a result of the news:
Lions, elephants and giraffes may soon be found roaming a lot closer
to home, as ecologists and biologists want to transplant African
wildlife to the Great Plains of North America.
... and ...
While
driving across the Great Plains of North America, how would you feel
about looking out the car window and seeing giraffes, lions and
elephants?
These next two went straight to context:
What
could have been the happiest day of Scott Forsythe's life turned fatal
after he was killed in a car accident driving 100 mph on the way to his
own wedding.
... and ...
Just 15 minutes before 22-year-old Scott Forsythe was scheduled to say "I do," a decision to save a dog's life took his own.
Now, which ones do you like, and why? Which ones don't you like, and how come?
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