While
neither is wrong, I'd say the latter is the best approach. You have no
reason to believe Forsythe is someone that would be known by name to
your readers. In such cases, the generic identifier would suffice in a
first reference, and you can offer the specific name as a secondary
detail later in the story.
(Remember, in a real situation you would have the rest of the story to fill in specific details and secondary information!)
(Remember, in a real situation you would have the rest of the story to fill in specific details and secondary information!)
Now,
if the victim was Oprah Winfrey, the name would be a good bet for the
lede, precisely because she is someone many people would instantly
recognize by name.
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