While
  neither is wrong, I'd say the latter is the best approach. You have no
  reason to believe Forsythe is someone that would be known by name to  
your readers. In such cases, the generic identifier would suffice in a  
first reference, and you can offer the specific name as a secondary  
detail later in the story.
(Remember, in a real situation you would have the rest of the story to fill in specific details and secondary information!)
(Remember, in a real situation you would have the rest of the story to fill in specific details and secondary information!)
Now, 
if the victim  was Oprah Winfrey, the name would be a good bet for the 
lede, precisely  because she is someone many people would instantly 
recognize by name. 
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