That is one of the most unneeded words ever. How so? Let's look at this sentence:
The board said that in its decision that parents should talk to their children about the issue and provide their home with the religious training that they feel to be most appropriate.
Now, let's get rid of the three references to that. This is what's left:
The board said in its decision parents should talk to their children about the issue and provide their home with the religious training they feel to be most appropriate.
Now, what's different? Besides the loss of an unnecessary word?
Most of the time, you don't need that.
The board said that in its decision that parents should talk to their children about the issue and provide their home with the religious training that they feel to be most appropriate.
Now, let's get rid of the three references to that. This is what's left:
The board said in its decision parents should talk to their children about the issue and provide their home with the religious training they feel to be most appropriate.
Now, what's different? Besides the loss of an unnecessary word?
Most of the time, you don't need that.
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