Friday, November 3, 2017

OOC #2: Good Example #5


December 3rd, 2017

Sustainability





Green Practices Matter



The average college student produces 640 pounds of solid waste each year, according to an article on Boston College’s website.



It is no question that recycling and other green practices help the environment, seeing that it conserves natural resources, protects our oceans, and reduces the amount of fuels burned. The question is what this generation thinks and knows about sustaining our environment.



Lissy Goralnik, an assistant professor of environmental studies and community engagement in the Department of Community Sustainability at Michigan State University, teaches a section of Introduction to Sustainability at MSU and said, “a lot of my students said they didn’t realize how many recycling bins are on campus and felt campus is making it straightforward, but other students on campus are not doing those things.”



According to MSU’s Recycling website, the campus provides residence hall recycling stations, hallway recycling stations, office space recycling, a recycling drop-off center, and the ability to donate unwanted materials to the MSU Surplus Store.



Holly Grech, a junior at MSU, said she recycled sometimes in the dorms and was aware of the recycling bins on campus, but her current apartment complex does not have recycling bins.



THIS IS A GOOD PLACE FOR A TELLING QUOTE FROM GRECH



Vinny Mattison, a fourth-year student at MSU, said he recycled more in the dorms because they provided separate bins to use.



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Mattison also said he is not aware of recycling bins at his current apartment.  



According to South Coast Energy Challenge’s website, “by throwing everything away and not reusing or recycling them will cause the landfill to fill up. They start to smell horrible and end up being toxic from all the harmful chemicals coming from styrofoam, batteries, microwaves, cleaning supplies, and other household products. Just by recycling cardboard, paper, and plastic there will be a lot less junk in the landfills.”



Grech said she thinks it is harmful to the environment not to recycle because you have to remake materials and use more energy to make those new materials.



THIS IS A GOOD PLACE FOR A TELLING QUOTE FROM GRECH





Mattison said he is not specifically aware of the impacts not recycling has on the environment, but knows pop can holders can get into oceans and harm animals.



THIS IS A GOOD PLACE FOR A TELLING QUOTE FROM MATTISON





The problems associated with not recycling are that it is not good for the landscapes or the animals. We are putting hazardous things that don’t break down into landscapes that don’t absorb it. This impacts all our systems; water, earth, and air are all one system,” Goralnik said.



“Recycling is great, but it’s not the answer,” Goralnik went on to say. “Before recycling we should be consuming less so we have less to recycle.”



Mattison said recycling does not take a lot of time, but it takes more effort opposed to just throwing something away.



THIS IS A GOOD PLACE FOR A TELLING QUOTE FROM MATTISON





Goralnik said recycling is labor intensive because it requires water, fuel, and resources to do so and we do not have enough economic incentives to make it worthwhile for people in our community.



“Every time you recycle plastic it becomes a less desirable product,” Goralnik said. GOOD TELLING QUOTE HERE



Though Grech said she thinks it is harmful to the environment not to recycle, she does not think enough people do it.



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According the article on Boston College’s website, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency estimates that 75 percent of American waste is recyclable, but we only recycle about 30 percent of it.



MSU is not only taking steps to make recycling easier on campus, but they are making campus more sustainable by reducing energy consumption and transitioning to more renewable resources, according to MSU’s Infrastructure Planning and Facilities website.



WHAT DO MSU IPF LEADERS HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THAT?



The energy at MSU comes from the T.B. Simon Power Plant which burns a variety of fuels to get energy including coal, natural gas, and biofuel, according to MSU’s IPF website.



T.B. Simon Power Plant began burning biofuel in 2008. Biofuels include green wood, agricultural residues (annual grasses, animal bedding, corn stover) and cornstarch,” according to MSU’s IPF website.



INSTEAD OF RELYING ON THE WEB SITE, WHY NOT INTERVIEW IPF LEADERS FOR THIS INFORMATION?





Another way MSU is promoting sustainability is by using geothermal energy, which takes thermal energy from the ground, and solar energy, which converts light energy into electricity, according to MSU’s IPF website.



MSU also helps students planning events on campus to “green” their event by providing recycling services, according to MSU’s IPF website.



According to Mattison and Grech, MSU makes it easy for students to recycle. “They’re everywhere,” Mattison said when addressing the amount of recycling bins on campus.





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Sources

·         Student at MSU: Holly Grech

o   Email: grechhol@msu.edu

o   Major: Elementary Education

o   Year: Junior

·         Student at MSU: Vinny Mattison

o   Email: mattis20@msu.edu

o   Phone: 1-810-333-0237

·         Lissy Goralnik, MFA PhD

o   Michigan State University

o   Department of Community Sustainability

o   Natural Resources 311B

o   480 Wilson Rd #151
East Lansing, MI 48824


o   (517) 353-3562

·         Documentary Sources




o   http://recycle.msu.edu/index.php/information/





ASSIGNMENT GRADE: (redacted)

INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS: GREAT JOB WITH STORY STRUCTURE AND ATTRIBUTION, BUT FOR A STORY WE NEED OT BE SURE TO TALK TO PEOPLE AFFECTED BY THE ISSUE, NEUTRAL EXPERTS AND THE PEOPLE IN CHARGEOF THE ISSUE. WE ARE MISSING THE LAST GROUP, WHO WOULD HAVE BEEN IPF OFFICIALS. CITING ITS WEB SITE IS BETTER THAN NOTHING FOR SURE, BUT WE REALLY NEEDED TO TALK TO THEM AND NOT JUST STRIP INFO FROM THE WEB. PLUS, BE SURE TO PAIR SUBPOINTS WITH RELATED QUOTES TO ADD HUMAN VOICES TO YOUR TEXT. STILL, VERY NICE WORK HERE!


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