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OOC #2: Good Example #1


November 2, 2017

Transitions



Every high school senior yearns for the moment of finally moving out of the house and living on their own. And for most incoming freshman, they have no clue of what they’re in for.



The transitional phase from high school to college is one of the most challenging things you will ever do, and moving into your dorm is just the first step; and when there’s an ample of bad habits, strangers, parking woes, and large workloads swinging your way—life becomes hectic.



According to Alton Kirksey, sophomore and kinesiology student of MSU, said NO NEED FOR SAID HERE; YOU ALREADY SAID, ACCORDING TO his first-year of college was like a love/hate relationship with plenty of ups and downs.



“The transition was easy for me because I never took my education for granted; however, I do understand if you aren’t prepared it can become overwhelming with a lot of ups and downs—almost like a love/hate relationship,” said Kirksey.



A visiting freshman and sociology student from Western Michigan University, Brianna Murrie, had a lot to say about how her experiences were going and the wakeup call that was much needed.



“The beginning months of my first-year of college was a new chapter of my life, where I still wanted to be treated like a kid, but at the same time like an adult. When I went home, my parents were shocked at who I became, college has helped me mature,” said Murrie.



Transitioning your life into college is an experience on its own, and according to Kirksey it was being alone which was different and even harder than the transition he faced into high school.

“The workload is less, the true difference is in the independence,” said Kirksey.



Murrie had said similar remarks in the key differences between her transition into high school and her transition into college.



“With high school if you didn’t have anybody, you would still have someone—friends, family, none too far away. In college, you’re alone,” said Murrie.



A 2015 study done by the JED Foundation of emotional health, found that 87 percent of students said their high schools provided preparation on college academics, but not how to adjust emotionally to college; another half said they needed to improve their “independent living” skills.



When asked about what advice she would give to incoming freshmen, Director of Academic and Student Affairs Kari Schueller Lopez of the College of Communications Arts and Sciences, was very detailed on what NOT to do.



“Students are in a big transition socially and it’s common to put a lot of energy into making friends and finding a social niche. It’s also incredibly important to not forget about the academic transition as well,” said Schueller Lopez via email.



According to a study done by Boston University, the most important thing to have on your resume is extra-curricular activities—internships.



Schueller Lopez said similar things in accordance to the statistic.



“Get involved! While this may seem like a contradiction to my first point, it’s not meant to be. Everything should be in balance; social life/school/family etc. College gets really difficult if students oversubscribe to social life over school, even vice versa,” said Schueller Lopez via email.



Liz Jorgensen, academic and career advisor in the ComArtsSci sector of MSU, gave advice on what first-year students can do with their time.



“Regardless if you’re undecided, or have already declared your major, visit the career center during your first-year to talk about career exploration, and internships, most successful ComArtsSci students have multiple internships by the time they reach graduation,” said Jorgensen via email.



Director of Employer Relations and Professional Transitions WHERE? MSU? Karin Hanson, gave thoughts on what the transitioning process entitles from a career perspective.



“From a career perspective, they need to be understanding of what their options are; the first thing would be figuring out what they like and what they don’t like,” said Hanson.



Hanson continued with a list of other things to do.



“Even if they’ve chosen a major, for example journalism, there are many different facets of journalism; so, by joining different student groups with journalism whether they’re thinking of the broadcast route or something sports related, make sure you’re jumping in and getting involved with as many things as possible,” said Hanson.



Transitioning into college is the first step among many that you’ll take, and mistakes are bound to happen along the way; according to Kirksey, it’s imperative that you simply learn from them and enjoy the ride.



“Walk your own path…enjoy the intersections but know that everyone is here for a reason,” said Kirksey.



Murrie said she learned a valuable lesson in her first-year transition of about realizing your surroundings.



“Watch out for vibes, if you feel a feeling that’s not right or a bad energy… you don’t want to be blindsided especially when you know who you’re, said Murrie.  



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Story Sources:

Alton Kirksey. Sophomore. 313-629-2556

Brianna Murrie. Freshman. 313-766-3244.

Karin Hanson. Director of Employer Relations and Professional Transitions. Hanson9@msu.edu

Liz Jorgensen. Academic and Career Advisor. Jorgen53@msu.edu

Kari Schueller Lopez. Director of Academic and Student Affairs. Schuell8@msu.edu



Studies:

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ASSIGNMENT GRADE: (redacted)

INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS: VERY NICE WORK HERE! THE MISSES WERE NOT HUGE BUT WORTH NOTING: I WOULD HAVE PERFERRED YOU SUED NEUTRAL EXPERTS FROM OTHER THAN COMM ARTS; USE ONES YOU DON’T ALREADY KNOW FOR THIS CLASS. PLUS, INSTEAD OF CITING INSIDE HIGHER ED (WHICH IS A NEWSPAPER COVERING THE HIGHER ED WORLD), WE SHOULDHAVE USED THE ARTICLE TO FIND THE STUDY OURSELVES AND LOOK AT IT DIRECTLY OURSELVES. STILL, YOU’RE DOING A SOLID JOB WITH THESE OUT-OF-CLASS STORIES; KEEP IT UP!


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