Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Controversial: An Anecdotal Lede Example

Take a look at this anecdotal lede approach and tell me what you think:


            Jacob Stevens was a proud member of his school’s women’s field hockey team last fall, but will not be granted the same opportunity this year.

            Stevens, one of four boys who helped lead the East Lansing High School girls’ field hockey team to the state playoffs last fall, was upset when the school board voted unanimously to ban boys from playing on girls’ teams Tuesday night.  

            The policy – favored 9-0 and set to take effect immediately – bans boys’ participation on the girls’ field hockey, volleyball, and softball teams, alleging that the size, speed, and power of male athletes poses a hazard for female players.

            “Not every guy wants to play football, basketball or baseball,” said Stevens, who enjoys the excitement and skill involved in field hockey and was looking forward to playing the game his senior year.
             With the new policy, he will no longer be able to do so, as there are not enough boys interested in field hockey to form a complete men’s team.  Stevens said that he never received any complaints about his presence from his female teammates.

            On the other hand, Sandra Adler, parent to a senior on last year’s field hockey team and an all-state consensus pick as player of the year when she played 30 years ago, said that “there probably are girls who want to play on the boys football or baseball teams, but they are not allowed.” 
            Thus, she thinks that simply because there aren’t enough boys interested in a sport to field their own team does not justify them joining the women’s teams. 
            “I just don’t think it is healthy mentally or physically to have the boys and girls playing on the same team,” she said.

            But East Lansing High School athletic director Hugh Baker said that if safety is the issue of concern, the new policy could hurt the athletics program, for the girls would have to forfeit any games in which the opponents have boys on their team.

            Unfortunately, some of East Lansing’s opponents are small schools that would not have enough players if they did not include both boys and girls.  According to Baker, had this policy been in effect last year, the field hockey team would have had to sacrifice their winning season and forfeit at least 10 of their 18 games.
           “It would be unfair to force our field hockey team to have a losing record every year because it has to forfeit all those games,” Baker said. 

            Jane Tribitt, the school board member who proposed the ban based on complaints from parents in both the home and away districts, said that there are also all-female teams who did not want to play East Lansing because there were boys on the team.
           The size and physicality of the boys can intimidate the girls, she said. She, too, believes “it is a matter of safety.”

            “I think other schools will adopt policies similar to this one and ban boys from their teams as well,” Tribitt said. “The question of forfeiting games will then become a moot point.”

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