In general, good (but not great) work on the second out-of-classer. Good writing and good structure, but still too narrow a range of sources, and a lack of neutral experts.
Plus, one fatal: We spelled Tibbs Brewing Co. as Tibb's Brewing Co.
I know that's not much, but that's all you need to fatal. Tibb's is not Tibbs.
Please, folks. Double-check every noun (person, place or thing), every number (statistics, street address, etc), every date and every word in every quote.
Next up are some evaluated examples of your work, with names and grades redacted. Please take a look at 'em; there re some good examples of things done well and common problems.
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