Here is an example of a very, very good out-of-classer, with extensive interviews from a wide range of sources and neutral experts and telling statistics and nice writing and organization. Please take a look and get some ideas on how we all can best report and structure our stories:
(name redacted)
JRN 200
Out-Of-Class
03/25/14
Slug: Smartphones
As technology advances, smartphones
are becoming a larger part in a growing number of students’ lives serving as
both a source of information and connection but also a distraction.
According to a 2014
study conducted by Pew Research Center on smartphone ownership, as of January 58
percent of American adults owned a smartphone of some kind with ownership
showing to be particularly high among those in their twenties and thirties.
This is an increase of 13
percentage points from what was reported in February of 2012
and an increase of two percentage points from what was recorded in May of 2013
for the amount of adults that owned smartphones, according to Pew Research Center.
Michigan State University Professor
of Psychology Dr. Linda Jackson said technology has been having a tremendous
impact on students’ lives. In an email interview Jackson said, “Just count the
number of students walking around or entering or leaving class with a cell
phone ‘attached’ to the ears. Consider the number of text messages students
send and receive each day.”
According to a 2012 “Teen,
Smartphones & Texting” study conducted by Pew Research Center, in 2009
the median number of texts sent on a typical day by a teenager was 50 and rose
to 60 texts by 2011; an increase of 20 percentage points.
Jackson, whose current research
explores the effects of information technology use on cognitive, social,
psychological and moral development said that technology and social media take
time way from students.
She said, “It pervades all aspects of a student’s life, from social relationships
with family and friends to academic performance to time for other pursuits.”
Lauren Keiser COMMA HERE a MSU psychology student and owner of a smartphone, said
her phone can be a distraction but she finds that having a smartphone is
overall beneficial and said she mainly uses it to send emails, stay organized
and keep up on social media.
“I don’t watch a lot of TV so
[social media] is my source for current events… it’s like the world is at my
fingertips,” said Keiser. “I use calendars to keep appointments and things. I
actually use an app for homework where it keeps track of due dates which is
helpful.”
Fellow MSU psychology student
Aubrey Gilliland said she uses her smartphone for the same purposes, but that
being in constant contact with everything through her phone can get annoying.
Gilliland said, “I’m not one to
text people all the time and when that is something that other people do it
gets annoying.”
Gilliland also said that having a
smartphone is beneficial academically. “Group messaging for group projects is
really helpful because if we all have iPhones we can group message to find time
to work together rather then have to email everyone or call them separately,”
said Gilliland.
Gilliland said her smartphone can
be a distraction but that it depends on the size of the class. “I’m less likely
to use [my smartphone] in smaller classes but in big lecture halls it is
tempting,” she said.
A University of Nebraska-Lincoln study said on
average, the typical college student plays with a digital device 11 times a day
while in class and over 80 percent of the students in the study said that the
use of their digital device can interfere with their learning.
Dr. Karen Riggs, a professor of media
studies at Ohio University, said in an email interview that there are those
negative implications to smartphone usage.
“Communication networks and apps on mobile phones can distract students
from face-to-face communication and studies,” said Riggs. “They can also
interfere with the classroom experience for which they pay so dearly. If you're
texting, even though you might think you can multi-task well, you're likely to
miss some important things in class.”
A University of Nebraska-Lincoln study said on
average, the typical college student plays with a digital device 11 times a day
while in class and over 80 percent of the students in the study said that the
use of their digital device can interfere with their learning.
Riggs, whose research focuses on
media and age, said she does believe that smartphones are both beneficial and
functional.
“Both phone and texting are a great means to keep in touch with friends
and family. Students can make plans, keep up with others when they can't be
together in person, and pursue casual conversation,” said Riggs. “Social
network functions are just as important. Keeping in touch and up to date on
Twitter, Facebook and Instagram, and now Snapchat, adds value to mobile devices
that suit students' lifestyles.”
She also said that students can best utilize their smartphones by
using them as digital planners and by taking advantage of more easily
accessible communication with professors.
“Instructors are increasingly using social networks such as Twitter to
make announcements and encourage conversation,” said Riggs.
Jackson said that when used properly, technology has the potential to
improve academic performance.
“Psychologically there is evidence that technology use can
increase self-esteem, self-competency and self-efficacy. In lay terms, knowing
how to use technology can make you feel better about yourself overall, feel
more competent and believe you can do things you want to do,” said Jackson.
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Sources
Name: Linda Jackson
Title: MSU Professor of
psychology; Department of psychology; College of Social Science
Email: jackso67@msu.edu
Phone: (517) 353-7207
Name: Lauren Keiser
Major:
Psychology
Email: Keiserl2@msu.edu
Name: Aubrey Gilliland
Major:
Psychology
Email: Gillil19@msu.edu
Name: Dr. Karen Riggs
Title: Ohio University Professor
of Media Studies; School of Media Arts and Studies; Scripps College of
Communication
Email: riggsk@ohio.edu
Other Email: karen.riggs1@gmail.com
Phone: (740) 590-4012
Pew Research Center
“Smartphone Ownership” Study
University of
Nebraska-Lincoln Study (pg 5-14):
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